http://www.kimbabe.com/2009/01/24/story-writing/ The Universe of K Wed, 25 Aug 2010 02:39:40 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.3 hourly 1 http://www.kimbabe.com/2009/01/24/story-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-3355 G Sun, 25 Jan 2009 04:26:11 +0000 http://www.kimbabe.com/?p=89#comment-3355 Look, the problem with you is that you think narrow-mindedly when it comes to advancing your plot. It has to happen this way or that way or it won't work at all, is how you think. And you can't seem to NOT think of something that DOESN'T involve torture. THAT'S why I throw all your plots out the window, because every thing you present to me involves torturing at least ONE character in your story, for gawd's sake. I left you a message on AIM but clearly you didn't get it. I already thought of a threat, it didn't even take that long. You'll see it when you log back on. Look, the problem with you is that you think narrow-mindedly when it comes to advancing your plot. It has to happen this way or that way or it won’t work at all, is how you think. And you can’t seem to NOT think of something that DOESN’T involve torture. THAT’S why I throw all your plots out the window, because every thing you present to me involves torturing at least ONE character in your story, for gawd’s sake. I left you a message on AIM but clearly you didn’t get it. I already thought of a threat, it didn’t even take that long. You’ll see it when you log back on.

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